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IN DA YARD

Post by Bullet Flo' on Sat Oct 23, 2010 11:53 am



(HOOK)2X
Dont get back,jus get that this's place that we hammer at..
Go f**ck'em in the yard,Go f**ck'em iin da Yard..


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look this the life i chose now it've became life i'm livin'
after gettin down in evry step still history in makin'...
spent lotta shit in givin', ya'll bitches started trippin'
this da fuckin devil statement,yall bitches gotta hear it.
Stepped up in da game not to quit,bigg dogg aint no name suppose to be flipped
if i do nothin else outta cribb,i gotta stand on da table stand strippin'.....
erribody wanna push me from da edge,wanna see me dead on da front page.....
i aint lookin anybody 2 gimme da break,get in ma way muda fucka juss do the mistake.....
mess wit da best die like'em rest,if ya try ya lil' trick i'ma bust yo shit..
its d original gangsta u fuckin wit,betta not interrupt yo in ma beef
feel it under ma pants go suck ma dick,pop it in yo mouth bitch get it deep..
gotta chip on ma shoulder they said im freak aint no love for no hoes man im da freak GO............get da ho and break in down if u lookin for fun,no matter how hard u pullin trigger ,I AINT NEVER GETTIN DONE...!!!!

(HOOK)2X

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Re: IN DA YARD

Post by NEPHOP MONSTA on Sat Oct 23, 2010 12:05 pm

decent little shit. The begining was slow but i liked it towards the end. Let us reading ur works.

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Re: IN DA YARD

Post by Bullet Flo' on Sat Oct 23, 2010 12:21 pm

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Post by thelastniggaalive on Sun Oct 24, 2010 12:05 pm

this is wack, u cant do.

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Post by Hype on Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:01 pm

thelastniggaalive wrote:this is wack, u cant do.

your the holiest offensive f**ck in this site lol...ppl dont come here to read your comments and f**ck up from what they been doing, at least be descriptive in what way you didn't liked it... and trust me anybody can do anything

look this the life i chose now it've became life i'm livin'
after gettin down in evry step still history in makin'...
spent lotta shit in givin', ya'll bitches started trippin'
this da fuckin devil statement,yall bitches gotta hear it.
here you jumped on the topic too fast, lol. be descriptive

Stepped up in da game not to quit,bigg dogg aint no name suppose to be flipped
if i do nothin else outta cribb,i gotta stand on da table stand strippin'.....
erribody wanna push me from da edge,wanna see me dead on da front page.....
i aint lookin anybody 2 gimme da break,get in ma way muda fucka juss do the mistake.....
Kinda Expressive.. This was aaight, Multies would do it better

mess wit da best die like'em rest,if ya try ya lil' trick i'ma bust yo shit..
its d original gangsta u fuckin wit,betta not interrupt yo in ma beef
feel it under ma pants go suck ma dick,pop it in yo mouth bitch get it deep..
gotta chip on ma shoulder they said im freak aint no love for no hoes man im da freak GO............get da ho and break in down if u lookin for fun,no matter how hard u pullin trigger ,I AINT NEVER GETTIN DONE...!!!!
The flow was there But rhymes were kinda basic,,

Like rest> With> shit> Beef,,,




This was a decent keystyle, and if you makin audio all it matters is how you spit. This actually is bit weak in Decription and substance and you deviated from the topic many places, but could be nice if you fixed


Enjoyed reading this shit...
Keep posting





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Re: IN DA YARD

Post by thelastniggaalive on Sun Oct 24, 2010 7:53 pm

ight my bad bro but this wasn'nt in topic.

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Post by thelastniggaalive on Sun Oct 24, 2010 7:53 pm

ight my bad bro but this wasn'nt in topic.

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Re: IN DA YARD

Post by Bullet Flo' on Sun Oct 24, 2010 9:33 pm

THNXX ALOT YA'lll the only thing i needed was the feed back frankly and i guess i got more than 1.........and m gon be workin out on what ya'll said im suppose to be......aight....:) guns
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