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Reflectionz of fire

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Reflectionz of fire

Post by Alien on Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:29 pm

Walk five steps ahead the rest, Rakim and Eric werent the only leaders
As I look down and see the flames of hell rise up out my sneakers
Use metal to fight the devil, his punches burn through my armored plates
Escape without a mental scratch running barefoot through the gates
Enter the realm of Earth to hear the noise of some scattered cheers
Then revisit my inner thoughts, "Abandon All Hope Ye Who Enter Here"....



Needed my story to be heard by the ones who had spiritual training
Found the Pope and told him of my encounter of which he found entertaing
I was gaining some confidence, so I told of whom I had held a Joust
Lucifer and his minions I said, just then, he slumped to his couch
I was told to never speak again, of my fight with the most evil
He said that if the story leaked, thered be a riot among people
I agreed, but I remembered to leave out a fact that hed never see
Becuz when I gazed upon the devils face, the best resembled me......



I need some feedback please for my first drop here
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Re: Reflectionz of fire

Post by raga4death on Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:34 pm

average shit, Not bad,
Flow was decent,
But Couldnt make much sense.
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Re: Reflectionz of fire

Post by Braineater on Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:37 pm

i agree with raga, ya could've made more sense..
Flow was tight.
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Re: Reflectionz of fire

Post by The Real P on Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:10 am

good flow.......but wasnt too good topical..be mo creative..

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Re: Reflectionz of fire

Post by Virus on Fri Feb 19, 2010 3:08 pm

Nice Imagery and good flow. I enjoyed this shit.
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