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Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by Concepts on Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:08 am

10 Bars (20 lines)
Due 24 hrs (after both of us check in)
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I checked*

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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by Raw-Neat on Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:37 am

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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by Raw-Neat on Sun Oct 31, 2010 1:07 am

ookk den i ll go firsttt


u eat from the same pot u piss in
i call this making u cry i dont call this dissing

wat uu dream of being tomorow, i was the exact yesterday
ur dreaming,, i m leaving, i m pimpin ur bitch when ur getting ready for foreplay

many have tried and failed so prepare to be slaughtered
i m raw i will rape ur bitch write my name on her belly button

ur just a kidd, my verse can curse the whole city
wat a pity, i m laughing at the clown who named u ability

i dont speak metaphors, but i m the ghost with white horse
i ll whip ur as* till u start to pray devil n call me lord

i m ubsurd... theres is no word in dictionary to describe me
u call ur mom a whore ur son barsterd but still u aint got guts to fight me

there are lot of deadly gorrillas but still m king of this jungle
after this battle ability will be flying north like his gyanendra uncle

i m the illi-est villi-an, i m one in a m-illi-an
ur no better that the last 1, i can kill u with my s-illi-ness

u can come with guns and ammos,, come with leeches and mammels
i will eat u in my half sleep when ill b wearing my pyjamas

these bars are just a trailer form my movie and this aint even the best scene
i m telling this for ur safety it will be wise for u to for fitt
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by chronicz on Sun Oct 31, 2010 10:08 am

nice drop fam but beware he's ma home boi and he's beast in the game ...
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by MC pikolo on Sun Oct 31, 2010 1:54 pm

@ imp : its just a battle fam ... i bet they both well aware of it..plus this is just for fun ..and for elevating their skills and lyrical techniques...if ya know what i mean ...and oh, RAW.. nice drop .. and as fo' ABILITY ..will see how much beast he got in his barz...
good luck to both of ya'll.
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by Concepts on Sun Oct 31, 2010 9:59 pm


First off! I drop heat like missiles from start to finish, on and off-limit, with sick bars you wud mimic
guts? I got the heart to murk and entire army unit, so who the f**ck are you? A lieutenant?

i'll break ya bones like it was fragile, rip ya body parts like an enormous crocodile
U's slow, anile - fake is the new trend and Raw-Neat showed up in style

You’s a parasite like stylops, with all them quiet drops.. U wudn’t be cool with ice wash
Watch Ability reduce ya value like price lines halved

Ya rhymes work? Please..I melt brains like hot cheese
Fact is! U can’t stand upto me like chopped knees

U need more pratice and time, so start training and stop fucking around
Ya name’s got ‘raw’ and ‘neat’ but ya verse says they r two things u know nothing about

Stop talking abt my mom coz word on the street is your mom’s a fine beggar
That bitch so nasty, whenever she get horny, she use rats as vibrators

I cum hardcore like pornos while ya punches are softer than cushion
U don’t speak metaphors coz its simple..this faggot ain’t got the brain to use one

Forget raping my bitch coz u cud come nowhere near her looking like a backpack junkie
Most probably you jealous coz my chick’s fly and your’s got herpes and hand gestures of a monkey

Raw-Neat’s so disgusting, he washes his face every Thursday, brushes his teeth monthly
And hit the shower once a year i.e. only on his birthday

Mattafact you so broke, you drink ya own piss when u thirsty and eat ya own shit when you hungry
We need to go back to history to see the last time he did his laundry
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by Raw-Neat on Sun Oct 31, 2010 10:04 pm

nice 1 ability

votesss plzzz nowww
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by Concepts on Sun Oct 31, 2010 10:05 pm

hehe thanks man ..Good luck!!!
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by chronicz on Sun Oct 31, 2010 10:08 pm

Ability wrote:

Forget raping my bitch coz u cud come nowhere near her looking like a backpack junkie
Most probably you jealous coz my chick’s fly and your’s got herpes and hand gestures of a monkey

Raw-Neat’s so disgusting, he washes his face every Thursday, brushes his teeth monthly
And hit the shower once a year i.e. only on his birthday

Mattafact you so broke, you drink ya own piss when u thirsty and eat ya own shit when you hungry
We need to go back to history to see the last time he did his laundry
haha nice punch fam..
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by Concepts on Sun Oct 31, 2010 10:15 pm

thanks bro
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by MC pikolo on Sun Oct 31, 2010 11:16 pm

yo, ability feeded some barz of "raw-neat" ....?? still if its good to vote then holla at me mods.

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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by Concepts on Sun Oct 31, 2010 11:31 pm

just vote Pikolo...The mods are dead :p
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by MC pikolo on Mon Nov 01, 2010 12:13 am

Mods are dead?? funny shit...haha... well how wbout this then.. i say DRAW.

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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by Nepalihiphop on Mon Nov 01, 2010 12:38 pm

Movin this battle to battle section.. Open your battles in the battle section yourself.. Call out aint a place to do your battles. its just for calling your opponents..Mod dont have much works in here except setting your battle records.

lets see votes in here
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by The Ams on Tue Nov 02, 2010 4:24 am

Draw!!!
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by Hype on Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:07 am

Nothing

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You’s a parasite like stylops, with all them quiet drops.. U wudn’t be cool with ice wash
Watch Ability reduce ya value like price lines halved

Mattafact you so broke, you drink ya own piss when u thirsty and eat ya own shit when you hungry
We need to go back to history to see the last time he did his laundry



Basically tyhis battle was weak. Both had enough self glory lines rather than punches. ability had an approach to some punchlines but there i felt that the main substance was lackin in those two bars i quoted there. So most of the was line Ehh... Nooo... WtF?
Honestly i slept in this battle.. This was long and weak read Lmao.. 10 Bars.. ??

Anyway..
V/ability For some attemps

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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by raga4death on Wed Nov 03, 2010 12:32 pm

wat uu dream of being tomorow, i was the exact yesterday
ur dreaming,, i m leaving, i m pimpin ur bitch when ur getting ready for foreplay


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i'll break ya bones like it was fragile, rip ya body parts like an enormous crocodile
U's slow, anile - fake is the new trend and Raw-Neat showed up in style
U need more pratice and time, so start training and stop fucking around
Ya name’s got ‘raw’ and ‘neat’ but ya verse says they r two things u know nothing about
Mattafact you so broke, you drink ya own piss when u thirsty and eat ya own shit when you hungry
We need to go back to history to see the last time he did his laundry


Altho.. abilit's lines were streched, he edges this easily with some concepts and the "raw and Neat" nameplay was nice..
Okay battle.. Was a landslide for rawneat.. Ability gets my vote
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by area51 on Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:36 pm

MC pikolo wrote:yo, ability feeded some barz of "raw-neat" ....?? still if its good to vote then holla at me mods.

Raw wrote

i m ubsurd... theres is no word in dictionary to describe me
u call ur mom a whore ur son barsterd but still u aint got guts to fight me

Ability wrote
Stop talking abt my mom coz word on the street is your mom’s a fine beggar
That bitch so nasty, whenever she get horny, she use rats as vibrators

this is not direct feeding. however It seems like he read his verse and tried it flippin this one looks as if he feeded the punch about 'mom' But actually guts to fight' and Rat vibrators are two different things.

Not actually a feed.. Votes counts
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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by area51 on Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:41 pm


there are lot of deadly gorrillas but still m king of this jungle
after this battle ability will be flying north like his gyanendra uncle

VS
You’s a parasite like stylops, with all them quiet drops.. U wudn’t be cool with ice wash
Watch Ability reduce ya value like price lines halved
U need more pratice and time, so start training and stop fucking around
Ya name’s got ‘raw’ and ‘neat’ but ya verse says they r two things u know nothing about


was actually a weak battle. however ability has some punches they were executed weak and the flow was slidy..anyway he gets this easily as raw neat didnt have any interesting punches.
V/abl

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Re: Raw-Neat VS Ability

Post by area51 on Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:41 pm

ability wins, closed..
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