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The Psycho Sickness

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The Psycho Sickness

Post by Toxicrated on Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:04 am

soul takin over by the psycho sickness,
no control over my body or my mental thickness,
i like this feeling so i bit this so it be revealing,
the true madness of which to me is so appealing,
im killing leavin your blood all over the ceiling,
pealing, the flesh from your bone thatll ill be cremating,
i like dating and mating them bitches who are hating,
will i be raping, im still debating, cuz my love is slowly fading
still the flesh i be craving, withdrawls are constipating,
mental glimpse, of a bloody eclipse, but humanities fate flips,
so wish for the best, dont wanna die by my hand like the rest,
first and only sign is when your heart rips out of your chest,
my family crest, a demon head, the family quest, the world dead,
calamity messed, a steamin red, profanity test, the world bled,
darkness, that others describe as heartless, thats me,
sparkin this, fat blunt as i wait alone in my fulfilled fantasy
Infestation of Molestation without any Hesitation,
for your information he who feeds off of medication,
Meditation of dark arts and the dedication,
to get that sweet soft skin for his restoration,
Innocence in sense is the worst kind to Be,
hense the fact that your the easiest to Eat,
Cannibals will go for the simplest Prey In Sight,
instinct will sniff you out anytime of Day And Night,
Incinerating Skin off the complex Human Anatomy,
Unsophisticated within the mind of a blood drinkin Enemy,
heart stabbed and gushed from Unnaturally Long Nails,
the least of your worries should be pain and Strong Impails,
Its soothing hearing the screams of Torture,
bloody bruises and burns from when i Torched Her,
The Psycho Sickness never any survivors that Witness The,
true gaze of Twistedness and the Wickedness Of,
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Re: The Psycho Sickness

Post by The Real P on Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:14 pm

nice one...this was good and i liked the way it flowed..
structures were a bit f**ck'd but wasnt that bad to critisize..
flow was decent and meaning was clear...nice multies..
overall:decent shit
keep doing these shits.....

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Re: The Psycho Sickness

Post by Braineater on Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:35 pm

Nice shit.. Enjoyed reading. You could make it more clear though.
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Re: The Psycho Sickness

Post by styleless on Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:41 pm

Pretty nice, nice flow.... Keep uppin Enjoyed reading
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Re: The Psycho Sickness

Post by Toxicrated on Wed Feb 17, 2010 11:53 am

well its a song i plan on makin its 2 seperate verse i put together the track sounds better then the plain written
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Re: The Psycho Sickness

Post by The Real P on Thu Feb 18, 2010 7:11 pm

yeah,,it's a good shit....if ya make it a song,juss inform me after ya record it.i wanna listen it..knamsain..

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Re: The Psycho Sickness

Post by Toxicrated on Fri Feb 19, 2010 12:42 am

i recorded it yesterday dude check on mah site music playlist
TheToxicPlayground.ning.com
called the psycho sickness ft. ninja red
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Re: The Psycho Sickness

Post by Virus on Fri Feb 19, 2010 3:16 pm

You good shit.
I aint catching ya link.
Your flow was decent. Multies were oK. It can be a perfect audio shit
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Re: The Psycho Sickness

Post by The Real P on Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:51 pm

i dint get the audio...

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Re: The Psycho Sickness

Post by raga4death on Thu Apr 08, 2010 11:20 am

Thos os Very Nice piece.. enjoyed reading...Keep dropping
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Re: The Psycho Sickness

Post by styleless on Thu Apr 08, 2010 6:58 pm

Yeah this is technical Piece.. I would definately love to hear the audio of it..
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