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MY PROGRESSIVE SHIT

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MY PROGRESSIVE SHIT

Post by The Real P on Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:34 pm

this is my song lyrics.....i'm working on it..
i wanted to know if it's .......



yeah,
every day,every night,i put my times in these shitty rhymes,
it takes alot of times to make a piece out of these lines,
i know it aint gonna shine,but i do it for my thanz,
i keep on spittin my pieces,but nothin keeps away from my mind,
it's a hard time,i keep on searchin those remidis that i dont find
all these happenin around,political sight juss make be blind
im juss trinna say the words these people wanted to say juss makes me kind
right infront of the market,i can see these people walkin paired
it's cold here,people gettin nervous they move but they scared
i heard someone callin me behind,but when i got to,no one's their
they keep on runnin away from death chanting some prayers,
the sky darken with black moon,yeah i know it scares,
when people lie down wit full of blood,out of my eyes i leave my tears
these people with sense of killin for freedom juss make me sick
i got no reasons to write my shit,cuz i've been thinkin it for weeks
but everyone here with reasons,cuz somewhere inside they playing tricks
alot of crimes,that stucks people around is what i want to kick
for those who aint got no home to live,no food to eat
no clothes to wear,and even when tired no place to sit
my heart tears alot of blood,juss like nails peeled out of my feet
this boy here im lookin at got nothin to dream,he's juss a kid
people out here on the roads look like they're dead
they say,life is stucked this way,we betta dead,cuz life's gettin fade
when i see all these happenings,i can turn around and see my breathe
it's too cold for all those livin in streets,feel like they're waiting for death
desperate to live,can do nothin,seasons changing but every where i feel is nothingness




aiyyo this world too straight cuz they dont find dimonds in the sand,
i convinced government that poor can still make earn,but they say me insane,
it's the situation with people thinkin,seems like they're all drunk,
they safe their heads from obstracles but they dont care about the trunk,
i know the pains inside those people cuz i've been workin till my lips turn white,
yeah i've waitin for help,seekin when it comes till everything got out of my sight,
when people cry forced to sleep in the rain i know what it feels like,
foolish act like a intelligent,cuz they try to get rich playing some dice,
i am disappearing with all my tries,no one's here for the sake of peace,
and it is juss this way,juss like this
to keep us away from the respect we deserve,the things that we own,
they dead us for population control,what happens when a poor is thrown,
no one worries,it's juss about we all living for selfishness,so harsh it seems,
this world is progressive,let's be together if we want no one to kick our dreams,

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Re: MY PROGRESSIVE SHIT

Post by The Real P on Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:36 pm

FEED ME SOME....

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Post by Virus on Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:18 pm

this was nice piece.i loved reading it.flow was decent and this shit was progressive and i love progressive shit..keep posting these shits...
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Re: MY PROGRESSIVE SHIT

Post by Braineater on Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:38 pm

Ok piece. 2nd bar was dope.
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Post by raga4death on Tue Feb 16, 2010 10:42 pm

good shit...i liked the way it flowed
and as braineater said,2nd verse was dope.1st needs some managing.
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Re: MY PROGRESSIVE SHIT

Post by frantikk on Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:05 pm

yeah...2nd verse was better than the 1st one..flow was good.
nice little multies and concept was better.
overall:decent piece.
keep posting these
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Re: MY PROGRESSIVE SHIT

Post by The Real P on Tue Feb 16, 2010 11:37 pm

thanks fo the feed..uppin fo some more..

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